Copy edit of alternative health website home page

 

I edited and rewrote this home page for a client in the alternative health industry.

 

Original Version

Educate. Enlighten. Empower.

Welcome to Health Reinvented

PREVENTION IS BETTER THAN CURE

 

AlternaCare is a new paradigm serving people who say ENOUGH! of the insanity who want to be part of the change based on a holistic lifestyle. We’re merging membership with a holistic new paradigm found nowhere else, to be the change we want to see.

 

 

 

Our Mission;

 

  1. Empower members with the Living Prevention lifestyle

 

  1. Build change based on health truth, sustainability, and results

 

  1. Educate, empower, and enlighten people with answers

 

  1. Through integrity serve people of integrity

 

  1. Lead an all-alternative health, healthcare & health insurance system

 

  1. Advocate for people who deserve better

 

  1. Provide change for new outcomes

 

 

 

How We’re Creating Change:

 

Through 6-Pillars outlined below, is our ‘big picture – big change’ mission. The AlternaCare Foundation is committed to providing answers that reinvent health, health care, and health insurance holistically. This is AlternaCare.

 

 

Edited Version

 

Educate. Enlighten. Empower.

Welcome to Health Reinvented!

 

AlternaCare is a radically different paradigm of care for individuals who are tired of the status quo. Those who want to be part of the change based on a holistic lifestyle.

Creating the change we hope to see requires leveraging membership to support an entirely new paradigm not found anywhere else.

 

 

 

Our Mission:

 

  1. To empower members to live the Living Prevention way.

 

  1. Promote change based on health facts, sustainability, and results.

 

  1. Educate, empower, and enlighten people with the answers they seek.

 

  1. Serve people of integrity by living up to their standards.

 

  1. Plan and implement a comprehensive alternative medicine, healthcare, and insurance program.

 

  1. Engage in advocacy on behalf of individuals who deserve a better level of care.

 

  1. Implement change to achieve new and better outcomes.

 

 

 

How We’re Creating Change:

 

The mission of our organization is to accomplish ‘big picture – big change’ through a series of six pillars outlined below.

Our mission at AlternaCare Foundation is to offer holistic solutions that reinvent health, health care, and health insurance.

 

This is AlternaCare!